Morgen E-SA und da kommen eben Texte einfach schreiben und soh und darin bin ich einfach grottenschlecht!
DESHALB hätte ich hier mal drei Sachen und hätte die dringende Bitte, dass jemand so unheimlich lieb wäre, mir bessere vorschläge für sätze geben würde und fehler kontrollieren würde...damit ich morgen wenn wir ungefähr so was schreiben müssen nicht die gleichen fehler mache!
Übrigens weiß ich, dass ich mies im Texte schreiben bin und das einfach nicht kann...also vom Inhalt *lach*...tja...also der is einfach echt doof.
I thing online shopping is basically a good thing.
It saves a lot of time, because you must not go anywhere to buy that things you would like and I have already bought lots of CD?s, DVD?s, book or games this way.
I can understand, that some people buy clothes on the Internet too, but I would not do that, because once time I bought clothes and nothing of them fit me. Since this I have decided, that I wont buy clothes on the Internet again.
Another disadvantage is that some books, CD?s ore other things could be damaged, so you must be very careful, if you would buy anything.
2.)
At present my life is so complicated!
I am very stressed, because my so many things are so new in my school and I also do many things in my free time. I play the piano, sing in a band and play tennis.
If I don?t do one of my hobbies I must learn or do my homeworks.
so, you see, I have not many time for my friends and that is terrible! I miss them so much!
As for school I want to have good marks, who wont that
But the problem is, that I am very, very nervous before a test and that I am so desperate if I haven't a good mark.
Certainly, I know, I must accept that a "good" or a "fair" is also a good mark, but that isn't so easy, but I work on me!
Do you have an idea to improve the situation?
und 3.)
From what you say in your letter, it sounds as if you are alone with your problems. Where are your parents or friends? Have you ever sit down with sb and told them what the trouble is?
In my opinion talking always helps!
If you haven't anybody with which you can talk please go to an counsellor personally at your school with your letter to me and that reply to it!
Another thing is, that you are doing many hobbies and that's perhaps the reason why all is so stressig
Are these three hobbies so important for you, that you lose for them your friends?
I don?t think, so perhaps the situation becomes better if you stop a hobby.
You say, that you must accept, that a "good" or a "fair" is also a good mark and you are right! But only thinking that you will make it differently, doesn't help!
You must do it!
I know, it's easier to say as to do, but I believe in you!
Hugs and keep going
*seufz* lachts euch jetzt gerade sicher kaputt...aber na ja... ich bin eben echt total verzweifelt, weil ich so schiss (nicht angst, aber einfach nervös-angst, so was mischiges) hab!!!
Grüße von einer verzweifelten und auf Antworten hoffende Fair
Hay-Ling hat Recht: Wenn dasteht, dass die Handlung länger dauert (z.B. bei Zeitangaben wie "for a long time" oder "all day") oder anzunehmen ist, dass es länger dauert und dazwischen eine Unterbrechung ist, musst du erst das Past Progressive (=was walking etc) nehmen und anschließend das Simple Past (=saw).